Try another version of the stopping point

Original creative challenge · A kinder measure of progress

1. Use this invented starting situation: A polished piece keeps changing without a clear reason.
2. Name the remaining problem before making another revision.
3. Make a small artefact that shows the change: a note, sketch, caption, or three-panel sequence.
4. Write one sentence describing what the artefact makes clearer. Keep this an experiment; no account, purchase, or public post is needed.