Try another version of the uncertain review

Original creative challenge · A place for unfinished work

1. Use this invented starting situation: A draft is waiting for review but nobody knows by whom.
2. Name the reviewer and the question the review should answer.
3. Make a small artefact that shows the change: a note, sketch, caption, or three-panel sequence.
4. Write one sentence describing what the artefact makes clearer. Keep this an experiment; no account, purchase, or public post is needed.